Gone, miss you :( Options

Now you’re gone, I don’t know what to say,

I don’t quite know why things ended this way,

Too much history; lets just leave it out,

There must be more that life is about.

Held my hand and guided me through,

But you let me go and hurt me too.

I built up a wall to keep you away,

With bricks and mortar so it wouldn’t sway.



I never knew I could hurt like this,

A second one gone, it’s you I miss,

Watching the clock, move back the hands,

Don’t let the waves wash away the sands

Looking for the sun, as it endlessly pours,

Tempting as it is, don’t close those doors.



Retreat to the past where it’s warm and safe,

Hiding from trouble, with no worries to face.

There are times that I just don’t get it,

As I think I’m breaking apart, bit by bit,

Only to see I’m stronger than most,

It must be good, but I won’t boast,

Pick yourself up and mend the wounds,

No one will save you any time soon…

That was a really good poem... keep it up!

Beautiful poem.....x

thank you

Salaams,

Wow, this one is really tight-I gotta admit

KEEP IT UP! And may Allah (SWT) make it easy for you, I feel ya

Im feelin ya too Umnwritten.

Im feelin ya too Umnwritten.

Lol 'JJ
And its "unwritten", not "unmwritten", lol!

This post has been edited by Luminus: Apr 3 2010, 07:43 AM